Thanks Dave, I really appreciate the fed back. I changed that here:
https://soundcloud.com/petimar/road-song-rough-mix-2
I listened to a number of my favorite Jazz recordings from the 50's and 60's as this is the period/sound I'm shooting for. Most of the soloists are very far forward in the mix, so I've tried to come as close as possible.
Any others want to comment?