There was a lot to love about this track. Very fun and inventive. The vocals didn't quite work for me, but it's mostly a mix thing versus performance. They don't really sit in the mix right yet. I like the separation between the radio-type sound and the more forward one. In the radio-type vocal, I think you can compress this more and focus on highlighting the mids. The one that comes forward could probably benefit from a little saturation or some such to fatten it up a little. Lastly, the pitch-shifted vocal doesn't work for me at all. It might for others, just thought I'd throw that out there. I love everything I've heard from you, so I'm not trying to be harsh. I just think this needs some tweaking yet.
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