Old 11-19-2020, 01:04 PM   #1
jonlint
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Default Walking Shoes

Hi all,

Wrote this unplugged song today - departure from my usual style. Feedback most welcome:

https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-linton-3/walking-shoes

LYRICS:

Everything was fine
‘Till you stepped into my line
Made me play your game
Made me to take the blame

But you and the dame
Will feel the pain
And I’ll end this terror rain

Cause you won’t kill my spirit
Leave you to drown in it
Time to pay your dues
Cause you gave me the blues
But I put on walking shoes

You can, admire
The flame you set afire
But I just can’t get
How you live with no regret

Did you forget
One small snag
When I leave you with that hag

No, you won’t kill my spirit
Leave you to drown in it
Time to pay your dues
Cause you gave me the blues
But I put on walking shoes

(Yeah, that's right, no more blues, just me and my shoes)
(No way I'm gonna loose, I'm gonna hold my head up high)
And I put on walking shoes
Yeah!
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Old 01-24-2024, 02:29 AM   #2
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Hi all,

Wrote this unplugged song today - departure from my usual style. Feedback most welcome:

https://b-shoes.com/womens-to-mens-shoe-size-chart/

LYRICS:

Everything was fine
‘Till you stepped into my line
Made me play your game
Made me to take the blame

But you and the dame
Will feel the pain
And I’ll end this terror rain

Cause you won’t kill my spirit
Leave you to drown in it
Time to pay your dues
Cause you gave me the blues
But I put on walking shoes

You can, admire
The flame you set afire
But I just can’t get
How you live with no regret

Did you forget
One small snag
When I leave you with that hag

No, you won’t kill my spirit
Leave you to drown in it
Time to pay your dues
Cause you gave me the blues
But I put on walking shoes

(Yeah, that's right, no more blues, just me and my shoes)
(No way I'm gonna loose, I'm gonna hold my head up high)
And I put on walking shoes
Yeah!
Quite subtle and soulful. It would seem that what the shoes have to do with it
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