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01-08-2020, 07:45 AM
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An Invitation (Original Piano song)
I did post about this last year, when I had just started working on the piano part. I wasn't sure whether to continue with it. To be honest I still think the song is pretty meh, but that might change after I add cello and other instrumentation. But this is it so far. Any feedback appreciated.
https://soundcloud.com/beforeawarene...ano-vocals-mix
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01-08-2020, 08:54 AM
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I like this! Needs some variation in the arrangement that the cello can fix.
Waiting for the next mix
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01-08-2020, 09:01 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by msundh
I like this! Needs some variation in the arrangement that the cello can fix.
Waiting for the next mix
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Thank you!
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01-14-2020, 02:10 PM
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love it!
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01-15-2020, 02:41 AM
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Originally Posted by Garrick
love it!
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Thank you! I'm still working on the new version which think will be way better.
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01-17-2020, 08:34 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Dream Of Sleeping
I did post about this last year, when I had just started working on the piano part. I wasn't sure whether to continue with it. To be honest I still think the song is pretty meh, but that might change after I add cello and other instrumentation. But this is it so far. Any feedback appreciated.
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I like this a lot Dream, your piano and vocal could suffice, but you need to bring the vocal up and add just a touch of reverb to it, not much.
The piano is great, very well done.
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01-18-2020, 12:39 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Tod
I like this a lot Dream, your piano and vocal could suffice, but you need to bring the vocal up and add just a touch of reverb to it, not much.
The piano is great, very well done.
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Thank you.
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01-19-2020, 10:40 AM
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Just lovely. I really like the melody - and non-standard chord progressions. Reminds me of Frank Turner meets Fiona Apple's "Idler wheel" era.
You have a fantastic character about your voice in the midrange. It's potential isn't fully maximized. Either: a.) bring up the vocal, b.) boost some mids in vocal c.) side-chain compressor to turn down the piano a couple of db when you're singing.
Nicely done!
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01-19-2020, 03:30 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by CrankyChris
Just lovely. I really like the melody - and non-standard chord progressions. Reminds me of Frank Turner meets Fiona Apple's "Idler wheel" era.
You have a fantastic character about your voice in the midrange. It's potential isn't fully maximized. Either: a.) bring up the vocal, b.) boost some mids in vocal c.) side-chain compressor to turn down the piano a couple of db when you're singing.
Nicely done!
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Thank you for the feedback.
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01-22-2020, 05:40 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by CrankyChris
Just lovely. I really like the melody - and non-standard chord progressions. Reminds me of Frank Turner meets Fiona Apple's "Idler wheel" era.
You have a fantastic character about your voice in the midrange. It's potential isn't fully maximized. Either: a.) bring up the vocal, b.) boost some mids in vocal c.) side-chain compressor to turn down the piano a couple of db when you're singing.
Nicely done!
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I went back and looked at the mix, and I did cut a lot of the mids from the vocals. I think I was so worried about the vocals sounding on top of the piano I went overboard.
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01-25-2020, 12:21 PM
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I'd like to give some constructive criticism - but it just sounds good to me, so there. Nice lyrics - some unexpected turns.
What piano is that?
Last edited by Bubble07; 01-25-2020 at 12:26 PM.
Reason: content
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01-25-2020, 04:18 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Bubble07
I'd like to give some constructive criticism - but it just sounds good to me, so there. Nice lyrics - some unexpected turns.
What piano is that?
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Thank you! It's Addictive Keys.
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01-26-2020, 04:29 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Dream Of Sleeping
Thank you! It's Addictive Keys.
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Sounds great - really nice performance then, singing was great too.
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