Old 04-04-2019, 01:40 PM   #1
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looking for another soloist for the second solo, also gonna rework the vocals when I have a chance

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Old 04-09-2019, 06:20 AM   #2
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Tasty. I liked the hell out of it. Reminded me just a tiny touch of Jamiroquai
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Old 04-09-2019, 06:29 AM   #3
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Tasty. I liked the hell out of it. Reminded me just a tiny touch of Jamiroquai
oh wow, thank you!
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Old 04-09-2019, 06:51 AM   #4
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I checked it out yesterday, very stylish, great stuff.
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Old 04-09-2019, 07:10 AM   #5
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Lovely track, totally echo the Jamiroquai comment above too, loved the vocals over the solo. Got some Stevie Wonder style vocals in the final minute - fantastic!

Second half of the song would be great if you touched on a little bit of funky disco style elements from 3:24 or 3:46, i.e. some rhythmic open hats between the beats to open it up a bit.

As great as it is, it doesn't 'grab' you as well as it could and a little change up would do it wonders in the middle.

By the way, Don't suppose you know anywhere i can buy paper in bulk around your area, do you?
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Lovely track, totally echo the Jamiroquai comment above too, loved the vocals over the solo. Got some Stevie Wonder style vocals in the final minute - fantastic!

Second half of the song would be great if you touched on a little bit of funky disco style elements from 3:24 or 3:46, i.e. some rhythmic open hats between the beats to open it up a bit.

As great as it is, it doesn't 'grab' you as well as it could and a little change up would do it wonders in the middle.

By the way, Don't suppose you know anywhere i can buy paper in bulk around your area, do you?
slough ave has a spot I think
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This great. You really stepped up in quality in your latest tunes.
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the feedback is gold, guys, thank you!!
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