Old 09-01-2015, 08:48 PM   #1
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Default landfill if you can

all those faded glories
to the landfill in the morning
make room in the knapsack
for aother pair of jeans
so goodbye high school yearbook
goodbye mary ann
kill the past and bury it
in the landfill if you can



out the bedroom window
in the darkest deep of night
shold he stay? ...just ask him
if you ask him right he might

he's watchful and he's wary
he's careful when he steps
footfalls soft behind him
remind him why he left


all those ugly stories
to the landfill in the morning
make room in the knapsack
for amother can of beans
so goodbye mama's cookin
goodbye mary ann
killing time to bury it
in the landfill if you can
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Old 09-02-2015, 07:24 AM   #2
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Music?
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Old 09-02-2015, 09:11 AM   #3
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working on it, but I'm not sure the words are worth the effort

don't much like the second and third parts... if anyone's got any ideas for word changes and/or music, go for it
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Old 09-03-2015, 12:31 PM   #4
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Words are fine - maybe I can make some music. I need a few days.
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Old 09-03-2015, 01:22 PM   #5
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okay... but if some words want to change, let them

i'll keeping working on the music, too

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Old 09-11-2015, 05:02 AM   #6
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all those faded glories
to the landfill in the morning
to make room in the backpack
for aother pair of jeans
so goodbye high school yearbook
goodbye mary ann
i'll leave you in the landfill
landfill if i can


out the bedroom window
a warm and windy night
to another stinking greyhound
another midnight flight
be watchful and be wary
be careful when you step
a snapping twig behind you
reminds you why you quit

goodbye faded glories
goodbye mary ann
i'll leave you in the landfill
landfill if i can

last thing I ever needed
was a girl in tattoo tights
she sat rightdown beside me
if you ask me nice I might
she said her name was laura
i said my name was steve
neither of us eever knew
what we could believe

all those ugly stories
to the landfill in the morning
to make room in the backpack
for aother can of beans
so goodbye snotty prom queens
goodbye mary ann
i'll leave you in the landfill
landfill if i can

killing time to bury it
in the landfill if i can

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Old 09-11-2015, 08:46 AM   #7
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Sorry, haven't been up to snuff, or however you put it, lately... I get there.
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Old 09-11-2015, 03:07 PM   #8
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Sorry, haven't been up to snuff, or however you put it, lately... I get there.
the words are still changing

I recorded some music...seems okay, but I went in wet with the wrong guitar patch and the structure's all haywire...

do what you want to do, including changing or weeding out words

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Old 09-12-2015, 11:02 AM   #9
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Sure, if I could only get stoned. We'll see about that.
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