Old 05-15-2018, 02:40 PM   #1
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Default something new I started on May Day

this is the bare bones beginnings that might turn into something

https://soundcloud.com/tgraph/may-day-song
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Old 05-17-2018, 01:30 AM   #2
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this is the bare bones beginnings that might turn into something

https://soundcloud.com/tgraph/may-day-song
I'm not sure if the kick drum sounds like pops or if there is clipping (a pop sound) when the kick hits hard? No so good a sonic quality.

The song is also sort of loud for the elements it contains. I would of relaxed a little on the snare drum and given the song more breathing room. Perhaps trying to arrange the instruments to have some variations in energy.

What do you plan on doing to the song? Lyrics?
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