Old 02-25-2021, 04:27 AM   #1
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hi there

this is a compo song

i would like to know if you think this sound is good "overall"




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Old 02-26-2021, 01:34 PM   #2
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It is missing, evidamment!
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Old 02-26-2021, 04:21 PM   #3
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It is missing, evidamment!
oups sorry it's there now
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That`s better! Overall sounds great, but I think you might be trying a little too hard on the vocals.
Try relaxing back into it more.

I think this will turn out very nice indeed.
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That`s better! Overall sounds great, but I think you might be trying a little too hard on the vocals.
Try relaxing back into it more.

I think this will turn out very nice indeed.
sorry for the late reply

thank you for having listened & you coment his appreciate
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Nice triplet rhythm, light and easy, I like that.
Super short guitar solo: Fantastic! I can't really
get used to the vocals. In any case, some passages
are well done, but some are taking a lot of getting
used to.

So, the overall feeling is really good, the song
has potential.
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Nice triplet rhythm, light and easy, I like that.
Super short guitar solo: Fantastic! I can't really
get used to the vocals. In any case, some passages
are well done, but some are taking a lot of getting
used to.

So, the overall feeling is really good, the song
has potential.
thank you enroe

thanks again the solo is some kind of(tribute to BBking)

singing in french (CA) is really sounding diferent than in english..
this is my friend-singer-composer (music is by me on this one..

thank you again enroe

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Agreed. I have only ever written one song in French & getting the correct inflections for me was the hardest part.

Surprisingly, my french pals who have heard it laughed right away, as they were supposed to do!

Can`t believe I managed to be funny in a foreign language.
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Agreed. I have only ever written one song in French & getting the correct inflections for me was the hardest part.

Surprisingly, my french pals who have heard it laughed right away, as they were supposed to do!

Can`t believe I managed to be funny in a foreign language.
just talking french to a person from France, me (Canada)it's very
dificult at first...
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Agreed. I have only ever written one song in French & getting the correct inflections for me was the hardest part.
Exact, in English consonants are "explosives", it's easier to get a good vocal rythme.
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Exact, in English consonants are "explosives" and it's easier to get a good vocal rythme.
also english singing has more 'emotion' than in french...
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also english singing has more 'emotion' than in french...

Ahem! Brel? Piaf? Plenty more, too.

I havent released my only french song yet but it just occurred to me to try the lyrics out on members in the French language section of the forums....
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Ahem! Brel? Piaf? Plenty more, too.

I havent released my only french song yet but it just occurred to me to try the lyrics out on members in the French language section of the forums....
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