Really interesting track! I quite enjoyed the off-kilter feel of it. The melodies were quite nice. At first I found some sections just a little too dissonant, but as I listened on, it had a kind of strange appeal.
Mix-wise, the vocal is buried in the track, and the guitars are really thinned out in the low end. I know it's probably not your intention to have a mainstream sound, but improving those aspects certainly wouldn't hurt the song's appeal.
I found the main percussion "backbeat" sound needed something... it's just too dry and prominent, and it kind of takes over the song... just mixing it a little lower and maybe using some distortion or ambience on it to lengthen its sustain would help.
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