Old 04-22-2016, 01:00 PM   #1
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Default " Come Closer " Take a listen. .

This is a quick tune i made.

Let me know how it sounds. Im forced to mix on some hyped speakers at the moment.

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https://soundcloud.com/toy-gun/come-closer
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Old 04-22-2016, 01:52 PM   #2
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around 0:35 getting interesting
0:53 the main melody sound -
surprising, but not in a good way after all, although I had to think of it until 1:30

1:59 the main melody sound is actually so irritating that it could have some potential as "so irritating you want to hear it again", as many number ones have been

but then it ended just when I was waiting how high the level of irritation can go.
It did not conform to the basic song structure for hits - make it conform (you know I mean the intro, verse1, chorus1, verse2 chorus2, breakdown, double chorus, outro) and who knows what you could have here!
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Old 04-22-2016, 02:32 PM   #3
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Haha thanks... (I think)

As for the melody, yes it's irritating. That's kinda what I was going for just a fun tune for me to make.
In terms of structure, a double chorus sounds scary. But I will try it to see if it's not too much. Thanks for the feed back. Does the mix sound ok?
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Old 04-22-2016, 08:15 PM   #4
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I updated the link with a little less bass and a db or two off the lead.
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Old 04-24-2016, 05:45 AM   #5
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