Old 07-18-2020, 01:57 PM   #1
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Hi all,

Feedback most welcome:

https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-lint...volution-train

(Words by Jonathan Linton, Music by Jonathan Linton)
LYRICS:

This world is ready
For revolution
Time to eliminate
Human pollution
We’re risin’ up
‘Gainst persecution
So tell me
Are you on or off the train

The train is coming
Change is coming

Revolution
Comin’ to you yuh
Revolution
See right through yuh
Revolution
Hide, we’ll pursue yuh
Revolution
The revolution train, yeh
Revolution
The revolution train, yeh
Revolution
The revolution train, yeh…..

People are tired
Of your illusion
This time no more
Forgone conclusion
We’re risin’ up
‘Gainst exclusion
So tell me
Are you on or off the train

The train is coming
Change is coming

Revolution
Comin’ to you yuh
Revolution
See right through yuh
Revolution
Hide, we’ll pursue yuh
Revolution
The revolution train, yeh
Revolution
The revolution train, yeh
Revolution
The revolution train, yeh…..

People are tired
Of your illusion
This time no more
Forgone conclusion
We’re risin’ up
‘Gainst exclusion
So tell me
Are you on or off the train

SOLO

The train is coming
Change is coming

Revolution
Comin’ to you yuh
Revolution
See right through yuh
Revolution
Hide, we’ll pursue yuh
Revolution
The revolution train, yeh
Revolution
The revolution train, yeh
Revolution
The revolution train, yeh
Revolution
The revolution train, yeh
Revolution
The revolution train, yeh…..
Revolution
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Old 07-18-2020, 03:47 PM   #2
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HELL YEAH!! I'm on board....
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Old 07-18-2020, 08:12 PM   #3
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That's one nice raw rock track! I like it!
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Old 07-19-2020, 04:19 AM   #4
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This track hits the nail right on the head!

Great stuff, jonlint!
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Old 07-26-2020, 08:05 PM   #5
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It sounded rather loud on my side. Did you crank this up or left some headroom?

Side note: is the revolution about eliminating pollution or human population? And, a revolution is simple a going back to the beginning of a process. One revolution is the going around a cycle back to the point of origin.

Do we really need a 'revolution' = going around a circle of events?

Or, should we not break free of the endless going around in circles?
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Old 07-30-2020, 11:32 AM   #6
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Well this rocks!
You showed a tiny bit of some high pitch vocals. More of that.
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