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07-21-2020, 06:48 AM
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(with you)Avec Toi
hi all,
this is a track from ours album my friend Eric & me,
the lyrics are in french has we are from quebec CA
the tiltle track is Avec Toi
thanks for listening
https://soundcloud.com/user-852678669/avec-toi
martin
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07-24-2020, 01:18 AM
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no one please?
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07-24-2020, 01:19 PM
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J'ai ecoute (how to make accent aigu on this keyboard?)
(My French language skills are not very good so I can't comment on the lyrics.)
Lots of passion in this tune with some well processed sounds. Nice stereo imaging.
Are you looking to take this track to the next level or has it already been released?
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07-24-2020, 01:42 PM
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Originally Posted by dug dog
J'ai ecoute (how to make accent aigu on this keyboard?)
(My French language skills are not very good so I can't comment on the lyrics.)
Lots of passion in this tune with some well processed sounds. Nice stereo imaging.
Are you looking to take this track to the next level or has it already been released?
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thank you dug for listening & coment
do you mean mastering? or make a CD ?
thanks
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07-24-2020, 03:22 PM
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Well, if it's already "out there", then it's finished.
If not, and I thought there was room for improvement, would you want to know?
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07-24-2020, 03:27 PM
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no idea what the lyrics r tellin' cuz i don't speak french. what's the story?
can fairly think of an alternative mix.
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07-24-2020, 03:33 PM
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Originally Posted by dug dog
Well, if it's already "out there", then it's finished.
If not, and I thought there was room for improvement, would you want to know?
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yes it's "official" Utube chanel
im already working to improve the mix for the CD
yes if you have some advices im open
thank you
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07-24-2020, 03:37 PM
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Cool.
Was this recorded in more than one studio?
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07-24-2020, 03:42 PM
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Originally Posted by dug dog
Cool.
Was this recorded in more than one studio?
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no all on my home studio
(i see you are from Ontario CA,im from Quebec CA !!!
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07-24-2020, 03:58 PM
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C'est CA. St. Louis de Ha ha...
(Please excuse the bad cross cultural humour....)
But, mix suggestions, for sure...
I would try to use a side chain compressor (Reacomp or other) to quickly reduce the bass guitar volume with every kick drum hit. This will make the mix feel much "tighter".
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07-24-2020, 04:02 PM
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Originally Posted by dug dog
C'est CA. St. Louis de Ha ha...
(Please excuse the bad cross cultural humour....)
But, mix suggestions, for sure...
I would try to use a side chain compressor (Reacomp or other) to quickly reduce the bass guitar volume with every kick drum hit. This will make the mix feel much "tighter".
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side-chaining it's something i'v not experimented(i know paralle-comp)
so thank you dug,i will search on Kenny's video about side-chaining
thank you dude im always open to learn...
cheer
martin
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07-26-2020, 07:58 PM
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Originally Posted by martmix
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Hi. I like the song. Why all this reverb?
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07-27-2020, 01:10 AM
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Originally Posted by RDBOIS
Hi. I like the song. Why all this reverb?
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thx on wich track you think there is much verb?
quelle track tu pense quil y a trop de reverb??
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07-27-2020, 04:01 AM
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Great song, in my opinion the vocals could be more in front and the drum kick is too present.
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07-27-2020, 04:04 AM
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Originally Posted by wakodoha
Great song, in my opinion the vocals could be more in front and the drum kick is too present.
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thank you wakodoha !
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07-27-2020, 12:16 PM
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Je pense que c'est bon et j'aime les guitars.
Excusez ma Francais, s'il vous plait : je suis Anglais.
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07-27-2020, 01:00 PM
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Originally Posted by DrGed
Je pense que c'est bon et j'aime les guitars.
Excusez ma Francais, s'il vous plait : je suis Anglais.
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thank you DrGed !!
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07-27-2020, 01:31 PM
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Beautiful song, beautiful guitars.
Yes, the shuffle-groove is still a bit restless,
and the vocals are very far back due to the reverb.
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07-27-2020, 01:48 PM
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Originally Posted by enroe
Beautiful song, beautiful guitars.
Yes, the shuffle-groove is still a bit restless,
and the vocals are very far back due to the reverb.
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thank you enroe
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07-27-2020, 03:13 PM
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J'aime bien la guitare et le groove, mais les voix sont un peu "enterrées". Est-ce volontaire? je ne sais pas.
Le lead bluesy est vraiment bien.
IMHO, le chanteur se retient trop au niveau de la gorge. en anglais, on dit.. he has to open up.. Il doit commencer a chanter sans tout bloquer au niveau de la gorge. Ca va aider pour bien des chose, y compris le controle, le ton de la voix et le pitch.
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07-27-2020, 05:53 PM
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J'aime bien la guitare et le groove, mais les voix sont un peu "enterrées". Est-ce volontaire? je ne sais pas.
Le lead bluesy est vraiment bien.
IMHO, le chanteur se retient trop au niveau de la gorge. en anglais, on dit.. he has to open up.. Il doit commencer a chanter sans tout bloquer au niveau de la gorge. Ca va aider pour bien des chose, y compris le controle, le ton de la voix et le pitch.
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merci greg,cest vrai que le vocal pourrai etre + fort
merci pour les comentaires et les conseils
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07-28-2020, 08:04 AM
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Has a nice groove. Seems a little over-reverbed. (this, from a reverb lover...)
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07-28-2020, 08:11 AM
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Originally Posted by Philbo King
Has a nice groove. Seems a little over-reverbed. (this, from a reverb lover...)
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thank you Philbo !!!
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