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Originally Posted by dea-man
Overdrive -
Don't get me wrong. I like that the piece wasn't "completely on the cookie-cutter" side of things. It wasn't all typical. I liked that.
I kept waiting for the hook to happen and I just didn't feel it. Probably just me. Maybe I wasn't paying enough attention.
I'll have to listen a couple more times and get back to you.
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Thanks, and I try not to get offended about my music (there's always room for improvement!). I really love when someone tells me something that at first seems disappointing but could actually help to improve my next song.
If there was a hook, it would likely be the line at the end "because I love the way the night, shines on wonder and mystery" which expresses the theme of looking at the positives in bad situations. But I don't want to have to tell you the hook! I'll work on it for the next song :P