Old 05-17-2019, 06:15 PM   #1
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Default Metal Track - The Shadows

This track was created in Reaper. It's largely instrumental, but does have some vocals. I'm not sure what I would compare it to, but hopefully it's of some interest to someone here.

https://soundcloud.com/user-775157753/the-shadows

Any feedback appreciated.
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Old 05-18-2019, 02:33 PM   #2
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You did say any feedback, so......
I listened once only.
Opinion is on content not recording.
My immediate thought was roughly the final third was the food here and the lead up to the meal was not so interesting.So I would argue that you should expand the part 3 of three, working that out into a similar length of track as you started with.

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Old 05-18-2019, 04:49 PM   #3
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Really like your sounds here.
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Old 05-18-2019, 07:11 PM   #4
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I like the guitars, but the drums are a bit monotonous and I would push them back and bring the instruments forward more. They could all use more high end to better mix with the drum sounds.
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Old 05-31-2019, 12:38 AM   #5
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Thanks for the feedback.

I've already experimented a bit with the drum levels, well the snare anyway.

The track structure isn't going to change. It is what it is, for better or worse.

Thanks wyleegee, much appreciated.
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