Old 05-01-2019, 07:52 AM   #1
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Default finally back at it! - New song: Minute man

Hey guys, Long time no chat.

I finished another tune and would love to hear your thoughts on it.

https://soundcloud.com/lukeswansonmusic/minute-man-1

Its me singing so don't be too harsh XD

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Old 05-06-2019, 10:29 AM   #2
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Ok ok, you can be harsh.
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Old 05-08-2019, 06:44 AM   #3
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Long time no hear man. Loved when it reached the 0:50 and 2:00 marks. I don't hear anything to be harsh about concerning the vocals. They fit the song just right to me.
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Old 05-08-2019, 01:02 PM   #4
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There was a lot to love about this track. Very fun and inventive. The vocals didn't quite work for me, but it's mostly a mix thing versus performance. They don't really sit in the mix right yet. I like the separation between the radio-type sound and the more forward one. In the radio-type vocal, I think you can compress this more and focus on highlighting the mids. The one that comes forward could probably benefit from a little saturation or some such to fatten it up a little. Lastly, the pitch-shifted vocal doesn't work for me at all. It might for others, just thought I'd throw that out there. I love everything I've heard from you, so I'm not trying to be harsh. I just think this needs some tweaking yet.
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Old 05-09-2019, 04:34 AM   #6
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Hey dudes,

Thanks for the feedback. <3

Come to think of it, i am mot using any compression on the vocals but am using a heavy amount of distortion which i thought would level them out enough.
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Old 05-15-2019, 10:02 AM   #7
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Great stuff Luke, really creative arrangement, cheers man.
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Old 05-21-2019, 07:22 PM   #8
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Cool tune. Clever stuff. I'd like to hear a little more presence on the main vox myself. Great job overall!
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