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05-02-2022, 06:42 PM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: San Diego
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Take It Slow (power pop all the way) - please comment
Hi all,
I love this group. You always give me such great advice. Please comment on this one. Thank you!
https://1drv.ms/u/s!AlSgXjpl0pdrpl2Y...fkJSW?e=xbPbRs
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05-10-2022, 07:51 AM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: Sep 2021
Location: Racine / MKE
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Super good man!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I really like it. Bit of Beatles influence and there was someone else I was gonna say and now I forget. But yeah, real good recording.
My only suggestion is at times the Aaaaaaaahs around 45 seconds and other places I think may be a bit hot and almost sort of cover up the lead vocals. Not cover, but maybe intrude just a hair. That's my only critique as far as the mix goes. Could be what I'm listening on too. Laptop and sony headphones.
Great song. Good job. I'm always amazed at how you all get such hi fidelity sounding stuff. I'm stuck in lo fi land for some reason. LOL. I think I need more compression and layers of reverb....
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05-10-2022, 10:50 AM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: San Diego
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Quote:
Originally Posted by 41TWIN
Super good man!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I really like it. Bit of Beatles influence and there was someone else I was gonna say and now I forget. But yeah, real good recording.
My only suggestion is at times the Aaaaaaaahs around 45 seconds and other places I think may be a bit hot and almost sort of cover up the lead vocals. Not cover, but maybe intrude just a hair. That's my only critique as far as the mix goes. Could be what I'm listening on too. Laptop and sony headphones.
Great song. Good job. I'm always amazed at how you all get such hi fidelity sounding stuff. I'm stuck in lo fi land for some reason. LOL. I think I need more compression and layers of reverb....
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Thank you, 41TWIN. Yes I wrestle with how loud to make those backups. I love the sound of stacked backups, so I probably push them too much upfront. Thanks for the compliment on the song!
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05-10-2022, 11:15 AM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: Jul 2010
Location: Online
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WHOPPER TRACK!
Absolute banger. More of this
The B Vox are right where they need to be
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05-10-2022, 11:35 AM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: San Diego
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Cosmic
WHOPPER TRACK!
Absolute banger. More of this
The B Vox are right where they need to be
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Well, everyone knows Cosmic has the best taste! My pal Gary told me!
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05-10-2022, 12:03 PM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: Feb 2013
Location: Sweden
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Great! A real time travel.
Great job.
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05-10-2022, 12:40 PM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: San Diego
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Originally Posted by msundh
Great! A real time travel.
Great job.
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Thank you, msundh!
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05-11-2022, 09:55 AM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: Oct 2020
Location: Wales
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Nice sound on this and sounds well rounded and conplete
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05-11-2022, 06:46 PM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: San Diego
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Quote:
Originally Posted by tjw1979
Nice sound on this and sounds well rounded and conplete
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Thanks, tjw1979!
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05-18-2022, 02:37 PM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: Aug 2010
Location: S.E.England
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Nice song. The lead vocal could be a bit more to the front to make the lyric easier to hear but that would be a pretty easy fix. You've got a really good voice.
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05-20-2022, 01:43 PM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: Jun 2018
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Absolutely love the BV's - you could almost do an entire verse with no lead vocal - just the BV. Those and the standard chord structure give this one a classic sound. Was expecting a fade out at the outro, for some reason. Enjoyed, Steve.
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05-29-2022, 12:53 PM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Stratford upon Avon UK
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Great stuff! Catchy, high quality pop is an artform in itself. Ended too soon for me. Just bring the LV up in the chorus, don't drop the BVs!!!
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05-29-2022, 02:36 PM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: Mar 2016
Location: near my POB
Posts: 388
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Quote:
Originally Posted by barrymk
Great stuff! Just bring the LV up in the chorus, don't drop the BVs!!!
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would not disagree
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06-01-2022, 11:17 AM
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Human being with feelings
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: San Diego
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Quote:
Originally Posted by barrymk
Great stuff! Catchy, high quality pop is an artform in itself. Ended too soon for me. Just bring the LV up in the chorus, don't drop the BVs!!!
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Thanks for the advice!
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