Listening on headphones.
It's a little weird regarding stereo-focus.
I could also like a little better focus in arranging and mixing,
choose what's in the spotlight and put that first on stage.
On the atmospheric parts, they're a little harsh/hard on my ears,
and seems to loose focus sync/timing-wise. That's maybe what you want, maybe not.
I'm not sure if the noisy/overdriven-sounds fits the song, a little disturbing to me.
Else, I do like it