pop?

[Jae.Thomas]

https://www.dropbox.com/s/tqq9ehw7vq...OTS_8.mp3?dl=0

[Jeffsounds]

Very cool! You have a great voice. Lyrics are very well done! Are those real drums? I don't hear any bass guitar???

[msundh]

Yes, and a good one too

[Jae.Thomas]

Originally Posted by doppelganger

great voice, a pleasure to listen, cool solo too, the only thing i missed here,
i would add something else in the chorus or would change something, because all parts of song sound similar and only higher vocal notes give me understanding, that chorus began already,
but that's just my nitpick . Nice song!

ok i read this and thought of something!

thanks!~

[Cranky Emu]

Originally Posted by Jason Brian Merrill

https://jasonbrianmerrill.bandcamp.com/releases

I thought I was listening to Nine Inch Nails

[Jae.Thomas]

Originally Posted by Cranky Emu

I thought I was listening to Nine Inch Nails

well the first track is an older one - the one this post was originally referring to is called "BOTS" not "flagplanting"

[Jae.Thomas]

updated mix and grid order

[smueske]

Really enjoyed your singing on this track.

[sai'ke]

Sounds great man! Excellent work music!

[Amazed]

Originally Posted by Jason Brian Merrill

ok i read this and thought of something!

thanks!~

Nice. Love it. Half time can often help to break things up?

[Tod]

Well what I heard is a song called "Goodbye" and I liked it a lot. I liked everything about it, it has a nice flow and very nice tasty guitar. The vocal sounds good and fits the song well.

Kind of and 80s but a nice 80s.

Good one Jason

[Cranky Emu]

Originally Posted by Tod

Well what I heard is a song called "Goodbye" and I liked it a lot. I liked everything about it, it has a nice flow and very nice tasty guitar. The vocal sounds good and fits the song well.

Kind of and 80s but a nice 80s.

Good one Jason

It is good, if you heard this on the radio you would think it was one of the long-ago american crooners. There is a bit of everything in it, very well done.

[Jae.Thomas]

are you kidding me? I'm blushing and the vocals on that one really need work. haha

thank you so much

also this thread was meant for this tune, but bandcamp changed what was on the original link:

https://jasonbrianmerrill.bandcamp.c...e-stories-demo

[Cranky Emu]

Originally Posted by Jason Brian Merrill

are you kidding me? I'm blushing and the vocals on that one really need work. haha

Listened to BOTS as well, so tell me when is your CD launching so I can buy it?

[Glennbo]

Originally Posted by Jason Brian Merrill

https://jasonbrianmerrill.bandcamp.c...e-stories-demo

Sounds too cool to be pop. Great vocals and the guitar is just the right amount of smug in certain places.

[Jae.Thomas]

Originally Posted by Cranky Emu

Listened to BOTS as well, so tell me when is your CD launching so I can buy it?

I have never been more focused on it, and I am working on it as much as I possibly can. Life has been rough, but that hasn't slowed me down. lol

[Cranky Emu]

Originally Posted by Jason Brian Merrill

I have never been more focused on it, and I am working on it as much as I possibly can. Life has been rough, but that hasn't slowed me down. lol

I am sure you will get there, just rush /-- EDIT -- / I meant... Don't rush it and mess it up. Everything I have heard so far I like.

[Jae.Thomas]

Originally Posted by Cranky Emu

I am sure you will get there, just rush it and mess it up. Everything I have heard so far I like.

thank you, sir. it matters. to me

[Tod]

Originally Posted by Jason Brian Merrill

thank you, sir. it matters. to me

Hi Jason, I listened to "BOTS" too, it's very different then "Goodbye", but it still shows your very tasty guitar and good vocals.

You also have a good way of putting your songs together.

I got to admit I did like "Goodbye" the most, it's a little more up my alley.

[Jae.Thomas]

*blush*

thanks! the guitar in goodbye is far more put together, that's going to stay that way. The guitar in BOTS is a single take, just to get the song out for potential collaborators