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09-01-2015, 08:48 PM
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landfill if you can
all those faded glories
to the landfill in the morning
make room in the knapsack
for aother pair of jeans
so goodbye high school yearbook
goodbye mary ann
kill the past and bury it
in the landfill if you can
out the bedroom window
in the darkest deep of night
shold he stay? ...just ask him
if you ask him right he might
he's watchful and he's wary
he's careful when he steps
footfalls soft behind him
remind him why he left
all those ugly stories
to the landfill in the morning
make room in the knapsack
for amother can of beans
so goodbye mama's cookin
goodbye mary ann
killing time to bury it
in the landfill if you can .
Last edited by flickervetigo; 09-01-2015 at 09:17 PM.
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09-02-2015, 07:24 AM
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#2
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Human being with feelings
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Location: Stockholm, Sweden
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Music?
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09-02-2015, 09:11 AM
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working on it, but I'm not sure the words are worth the effort
don't much like the second and third parts... if anyone's got any ideas for word changes and/or music, go for it
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09-03-2015, 12:31 PM
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Words are fine - maybe I can make some music. I need a few days.
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09-03-2015, 01:22 PM
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okay... but if some words want to change, let them
i'll keeping working on the music, too
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09-11-2015, 05:02 AM
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all those faded glories
to the landfill in the morning
to make room in the backpack
for aother pair of jeans
so goodbye high school yearbook
goodbye mary ann
i'll leave you in the landfill
landfill if i can
out the bedroom window
a warm and windy night
to another stinking greyhound
another midnight flight
be watchful and be wary
be careful when you step
a snapping twig behind you
reminds you why you quit
goodbye faded glories
goodbye mary ann
i'll leave you in the landfill
landfill if i can
last thing I ever needed
was a girl in tattoo tights
she sat rightdown beside me
if you ask me nice I might
she said her name was laura
i said my name was steve
neither of us eever knew
what we could believe
all those ugly stories
to the landfill in the morning
to make room in the backpack
for aother can of beans
so goodbye snotty prom queens
goodbye mary ann
i'll leave you in the landfill
landfill if i can
killing time to bury it
in the landfill if i can
Last edited by flickervetigo; 09-11-2015 at 05:10 PM.
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09-11-2015, 08:46 AM
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Sorry, haven't been up to snuff, or however you put it, lately... I get there.
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09-11-2015, 03:07 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Jorgen
Sorry, haven't been up to snuff, or however you put it, lately... I get there.
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the words are still changing
I recorded some music...seems okay, but I went in wet with the wrong guitar patch and the structure's all haywire...
do what you want to do, including changing or weeding out words
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09-12-2015, 11:02 AM
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Sure, if I could only get stoned. We'll see about that.
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