this has lots of good aspects. solid bass line. distinctive song sections. good drums. good ending.
mix sounds very trebly to me, anyone else - especially the first couple measures.
yes I also heard a glitch right after that.
the effect on the vocals (double tracked? chorus fx?) is not good especially in the first verse. at least if the vocal quality is so-so, be proud of them rather than trying to blend them. well, maybe. its a tradeoff.
try to vary the vocal melody among verses.
the lead guitar playing the vocal melody is a bit too repetitive since the vocal itself is already highly repetitive. in some songs that technique sounds awesome but here it sounds too cliche. the rhythm of the bass could be varied from following the vocal melody too.. just add a little bit of syncopation. maybe overall the bass rhythm is really why the entirety seems repetitive.
overall very solid. two thumbs up.
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