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12-27-2020, 01:44 PM
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Dark Blood
Last edited by Dennis; 01-07-2021 at 06:25 AM.
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12-29-2020, 12:15 AM
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I think the intro before the full band enters sounds good. Can't make out any of the lyrics completely though so maybe that's an volume/eq issue or a pronunciation problem. The drums sound a little dull but could be a genre thing. I'd maybe eq and add some small amounts of reverb to them. There's some really bad fret noise at around 1:39-1:40 that should be toned down. There's more fret noise in the other choruses as well. There's a hard "S" in 3:02-3:03 you might want to drop down in volume. I think the synth part at 3:19 was too quiet.
Overall, a rather nice sounding mix! Mastering will surely bring some low end and high end out. Not my cup of tea musically so take my "advices" with a grain of salt!
Keep up the good work!
PW
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12-29-2020, 01:04 AM
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Thank you very much for listening and advice. I will try to make the changes you suggest.
do the guitars, apart from the noises of the frets, sound good to you? Regarding the low end, do you think it should be more present?
Thanks!
Last edited by Dennis; 12-29-2020 at 01:11 AM.
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12-29-2020, 08:11 AM
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I agree with Pink Wool on vocal intelligibility and maybe the guitar squeaks but the mix is good enough that it's down to the nitpick level... so be careful not to overdo the last mile so to speak. Nice job!
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12-29-2020, 08:26 AM
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Thanks a lot for listening and commenting!
I'll try to remake the voice and fix the guitar.
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01-04-2021, 11:47 AM
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I agree with what has already been voiced. I think you're pretty close but would like the vocal clear and focused. The potential for a dynamic powerful ride is definitely there.
Nice work, I'll be looking forward to the next update.
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01-04-2021, 01:58 PM
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Great song.
Maybe some pitch glitches in the vocals, but's ok.
The mixing comments I leave to the others
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01-05-2021, 06:32 AM
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Thanks for listening BCF! & Msundh!
I will post a new version of the mix shortly.
I hope to be able to solve the problems indicated by you.
Thanks!
Msundh
I'm curious how the mix looks to you
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01-05-2021, 09:21 AM
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The mix sounds fine. I would the vocals to stand out more, both in the quiet intro and in the rest.
If Karbo hasn't mentioned it, I wouldn't noticed the guitar squeaks.
My mixing is trial and error
I will never make a comment like 'you should reduce 1.2 dB on 4.3kHz', cuz that beyond my abilities.
Anyway, I really like the singers voice, so don't put her down, Db wise
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01-05-2021, 09:26 AM
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thank you very much for the suggestions
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01-07-2021, 07:53 AM
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I didn't get to listen super close but sounds much better I think.
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01-07-2021, 07:57 AM
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Sounds good to me.
You could remove some high Freq on the cymbals when it starts to rock, to avoid hearing injuries
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01-07-2021, 08:52 AM
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Thanks Karbomusic!
Thanks for listen msudh
Do you intend to remove high frequencies on crashes or in general on all cymbals?
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01-07-2021, 09:36 AM
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It was kinda sharp, but mostly the first bang on the cymbals.
If you listen in phones it's unpleasant with that sudden sound.
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01-07-2021, 09:45 AM
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Thanks for the tip
I'll fix it
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