Vocals too loud during the quiet parts and the drums are way out of time. There's cool and catchy stuff but it's really uneven, mostly due to the wonky drums. Or maybe if you quantize the different drum elements to different increments? It just sounds like a lot of them chose the wrong beat to quantize to.
I'd remove the drums and find a drummer who'll record a similar. It's a worthwhile song, so I think you can easily attract a collaborator.
I'd help you out but I'm not a great drummer so it would take me too long.
Maybe try some automation on the vox to even it out a bit? I agree the cool parts of the music sound very Bowie. Sorry if I'm too critcal, but it's a cool track, so keep going!
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