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Old 06-13-2022, 01:47 PM   #16
Jopame
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Default great song

Listened to the song several times. And I was curious about your other songs. Also had a listen on all your other tracks.
In general - my taste - I would raise the snare a bit and give it more punch. The kick sounds just right for me.
Vocals is too quiet and not prominent enough.
I have the impression that your guitar sound is low-passed at 2kHz (maybe I'm completely wrong, but I do have this impression). Maybe you had the mic far off-axis when recording? The guitar sound is full of unpleasant noise, which I don't like.
And: put the ReaTune on your vocal track. Your voice is sometimes a bit off, rather flat than sharp. It does sound not professionally when the voice is not tight on the note where it should be (this is meant mainly for your 5 other tracks).
Ah, nearly forgot: great song. And puuh, 6 songs within a few weeks. Lot of work
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