I think the composition is excellent - the melody is catchy, and the good lyrics reflect an interesting view on life.
The guitar playing is 100% campfire-ready, but the singing.....maybe 80%. Most of it is right-on, but you try to reach some highs and lows that aren't right for you. When I run into that dilemma (often), I just change those parts of the melody that I can't handle. After all, it's your song - you can change whatever you want, and in the end, nobody knows but you (and us here on this page, but we won't tell).
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