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Old 01-11-2021, 11:03 AM   #35
Jorgen
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For some reason, this one came up in my YouTube flow as "recommended". So I'll have my say - You should work harder on writing and performance. And arranging.

In other words: The musical element (harmony) ain't much. The challenge here would be to make a musical piece of what is there (it is what it is). I'd go for variation, dynamics, and effects, just to add some movement and contrast.

And I would crank those drums if they sound good. If not, replace them with a good-sounding sample/loop.

The bass/solo synth "sound" is the best thing here (and certainly pushed to the front). But: the notes it/they play are all over the place, harmonically speaking, and too busy, imo. It's not enough as the foundation of a song. Again, imo.
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